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   " Espiritus Despertum " she chanted as she cast the final spell . At last , she had conjured up the perfect creature . Her very own trick or treater , was now ready for Halloween . Together they would conquer the world and as many Halloween souls as they could.
  His name was fella . He was the scariest little creature you ever saw . He wore a red helmut , that was cracked all over . Half of it was melted to his head . Sharp jagged pieces of metal poked out of his face . His left eyeball was half ways out of it's eye socket . Every now and then it leaked blood . The right side of his face was covered with sqwiggly purple scars . They looked like worms crawling on his face .
  She put the little creature on her broom stick . Down to the village they flew . She told him to gather as many trick or treaters as he could . So she could capture their Halloween souls . " Those little humans they are so greedy" she wailed ! She swooped down and with a violent thrust , kicked him off the broom . The little creatures eye squirted blood , as he tumbled on the ground ! Then she bolted up to the black skies , like a super sonic jet ! " I hate humans"  she screemed !
 
   As the little creature stood there , all splattered in blood .  He shouted back as loud as he could !  "You evil witch , don't you know....................................humans hate themselves".  
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I had to edit half of the story out. This is what I came up with. Here's the witch in the story

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:iconzinnia-aster:
This is really neat! I love this story, it paints pictures in my head. Again the end is awesome "Humans hat themselves". Brilliant. You described creepy fella very well. I am impressed. :)

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Thanks , I'm so glad you like my writing. This is part of a longer story I was writing. I adapted the story and characters to fit the theme of the contest. Now, I am very motivated to go on with my writing , thanks again for your comment.

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:iconzinnia-aster:
You're welcome. It is very interesting, I quite like it. :)

I am very glad you are motivated.

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haha neat

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:icongranados602:
Thanks!

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no probs

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:iconblinkjfg:
I really liked the way you incorporated Fella into your short story.

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:icongranados602:
Thanks! Originally it was a story I wrote about another character.

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:iconchar10tt3:
i liked the description of fella it was very imagnative
:icongranados602:
Thanks for the comment!

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